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Andrew
5/11/2017 10:09:30 pm
I like how you used good punctuation and along story
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Tante Ad
5/15/2017 11:26:53 pm
Charly! What a writing talent!! Love the whole story, with the highlight of letting the poo smell out of the window and wishing the city good luck with it;);) Looking forward to read the next chapter! Big kiss, also to your brother and siss (rhymes;))
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Tante Ad (part two;)
5/15/2017 11:32:34 pm
Ánd the doctoring ánd the parade of course, also my favorite parts!
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